The husband walks to the check-in counter to ask for his room and the bellboy brought the luggage up into the hotel room.
HUSBAND:
I should notify my wife that I have reached the hotel so that she knows that I have already arrived.
INT- HOTEL ROOM - MID MORNING.
The husband walks into the room, takes out his macbook and put on the table while connecting the internet cable to the macbook to start typing the email he had hit a wrong letter in the email address without noticing.
HUSBAND:
It still early I shall go and have a nap while i wait for a reply for my email.
EXT- CEMETERY- AFTERNOON
An old lady whose husband is a priest and just died due to cancer was kneeling down in front of the coffin and crying, she then received an unknown email from her iPhone. Then she read the email.
WIFE:
Dearest Wife,
Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow.
P.S Sure its hot down here.
Old lady was stun and she fainted after she read the email.
Bennett and Bryan.
I like your story as the actions are very specific.
ReplyDelete.____.|| I like this story, however, its kind of unlikely. Why would you check out your phone when the person you love most die?!?!? </3 Possible, but Unlikely
ReplyDeleteGood story.Format is ok.
ReplyDeleteI like your story as you put in details for your actions.
ReplyDeleteProper text and format. Good good good.
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