Wednesday 27 March 2013

Wrong Email Address by Jason Ng, Tan Kian Chong


Wrong Email Address
by
Jason Ng
Tan Kian Chong


INT - HOTEL GRANDE, PARIS - AFTERNOON
Lead male walks into hotel with four luggages.
HUSBAND
Okay. I have arrived. Time to send an email, to inform Jacklynn of the preparations.
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Husband then sends email to “kacklynn@intermail.sg
Husband
Hmmm… She should arrive soon.
CAPTION: THOUSANDS OF KILOMETERS AWAY...
INT - COLUMBARIUM - DAY
A grieving woman(Kacklynn) in front of a columbarium niche. Her husband was a preacher, and she died a few days back. She went back home and posted her death on a funeral website. She casually changes the tabs and sees a foreign email.
Kacklynn
Better check the email.
Kacklynn glances at the email, then froze. Then giving a loud scream, staggered off her chair, walked to the stairs and tumbled down from it. Her family members helped her to her chair before her son, Sylvester, read out the email.

Sylvester
Dearest Wife,
Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow.
P.S. Sure is hot down here.
Sylvester and the other family members who heard or read the letter froze, dumbfounded.




7 comments:

  1. I like how you did the name switch, very familiar... (Jordan comment)

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    1. I liked how it was very descriptive good job! but one thing it was missing was that after the headings such as Kacklynn or Sylvester, you must add the semicolon, ":". A bit too descriptive until she screams and walks backwards a falls and rolls down the stairs!

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