Thursday 24 January 2013

Defective Vase(By Farruq, Jerrold, Jeff)


7 comments:

  1. Should add more things that you bought.

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  2. What do your mean by 'Package dipped to the ground?' Could have elaborated on how the defect happened.

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  3. You should add more about Emily's reaction.

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  4. You should add how this incident has inconvenienced Emily

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  5. Cracked? Which part of the vase was cracked?

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  6. Try to add in some suggestions.

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